Proposed ammendment to 'Hostage Scene'

Having filmed the 'hostage scene' last week, when it was uploaded onto the computer, we realised it didn't really have any effect, the lighting was wrong and the mise-en-scene didn't have anything distressing about it, so when I'm going to get this scene re-shot from a high angle looking down onto the room. A CCTV effect could then be added afterwards on iMovie. I'm also going to make sure that the hostage is clearly struggling rather than just sitting still like in the previous shoot. I hope that all this will give the impression that a school is clearly under attack.

R.K.