We have decided that we want to play on the title of our film a bit more and that we need more dialogue. An idea we have come up with is that Valentine could do a monologue in a card shop of the cards section of a store, and because we're still filming relatively near Valentines Day, he could pick up a Valentines Day card whilst he is talking. This would give us some extra material to work with an we would have more dialogue in the trailer.
An additional idea I have just thought of is that Valentine could use a dodgy chat up line on a girl, which ultimately fails and he could get slapped? This could help to enforce the idea that Valentine is a bit of a failure.
R.K.
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